Blank Space Adventure (Serial Story) — Chapter 5

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Chapter 5: Things go thump in the dark

Thump!

Whatever was behind the door, and between us and the main computer, really wanted in.

Thump! Thump! The black goo that had once been part of the fungal lifeform of the Andromeda Syndicate, replied to the thing on the other side of the door.

“What the hell?” whispered T.

“The first two habitats were destroyed but the third one has an atmosphere. I’m going in to look,” the cheerful voice of S burst through the radio earpieces and made us both jump. 

The glass, or more likely transparent aluminium, cracked under the onslaught of the goo. 

“We need to get out of here,” I said. I could feel the malice coming off of the tank.

We headed back to the elevator as the thumping continued. Instead of activating it, T ran to a console on the other side of the room. 

Thump, Crack! The door bent inward and somehow still held. 

“We need to get out of hare,” I repeated.

T nodded and said, “We need to contain whatever is happening here. I don’t want that goo dripping down on our heads. 

He was right and I looked around for anything that would help us. Fire, I thought and my hands moved on their own. I felt heat coursing through my body but before it could release, there was a searing pain in my head.

Thump,Thump,Thump! I couldn’t tell if the sound was my own heartbeat, my brain trying to escape from my ears, or whatever monster was behind that door.

“M! Get up. Please,” barked T. He sounded scared.

I slowly stood up and he placed a gun in my hands. It was an AS plasma rifle that shot a ball of superheated gas. It was a nasty weapon that could sear a hole straight through most armour.

“I’m okay,” I said and took the safety off the weapon.

“You have blood coming out of your nose,” he replied. “I need a few minutes at the terminal. Hold whatever comes out of that glass or door back as long as you can.”

I took a deep breath and took a shooting stance. These weapons didn’t have much kick but they still had enough to land me on my butt if I wasn’t careful. I must have used these weapons before because I was inundated with information about them.

His hands moved faster than I could register. I didn’t know what he was doing but just as the door slammed open, I saw him bleeding from his nose and ears. 

The last thump was cut off by a victorious yowl and metallic crunch as the door broke open. 

Whatever the creatures had been, they were now covered in black sludge. Most likely the same black goo from the tank. They were roughly the size of and shape of grizzly bears but with an elongated head and far too many black teeth. Their flesh rippled, sending shivers of nausea throughout my body.

I shot at the creatures but they barely seemed to notice. The plasma dissipated on their bodies and seemed to do nothing but slow them down a little. 

T whooped and the roof started retracting. Despite the shielding, the sun was blindingly hot. Joining me on the elevator, T activated it and said, “Don’t look at the sun.”

We descended and an iris closed above us. I heard a loud crash, a whooshing sound and then nothing. “What did you do?” I asked.

“I vented the top level,” T replied.

“That was quick thinking,” I said before adding, “I thought you said you couldn’t read anything?”

He turned white and his eyes went large. “I can’t, I couldn’t, I…” he trailed off. “Once I was there I just knew what to press. Like the computer was telling me. Wow. I wish I understood why.”

“Me too,” I said sadly. I really wanted to understand. Not knowing frustrated me in a way that made my whole body ache. “Do you think there’s another computer we can access that will tell us if we can fly this thing away from the sun?”

He shrugged. We arrived on the next floor, and he walked over to a wall and pushed on it. It released a hidden door. Inside was a wall filled with blinking lights. T touched the wall and said, “The station doesn’t have the energy to escape the sun’s gravity. The whole station is on energy saving mode. I—” He fell to the ground and started to convulse.

I hesitated, not knowing what to do. When I finally decided to act, he stopped moving. A loud popping noise followed by a gush of blood from the back of his neck startled me. Something metallic lay on the ground a few metres from him and I crushed it for good measure.

The room was filled with people but I couldn’t see anything like a first aid kit anywhere. I leaned down to T and gently touched his neck. I felt a pull of energy in the back of my mind and I focused on healing him. A blueish light glowed around my fingers and into the wound. I watched as it closed and the skin knit itself back together.

Pain filled my body and instead of fighting it, I let it wash over me. I focused on the cold metal floor and breathing. The pain eventually passed and I checked T for a pulse.

Into the earpiece, I said, “T is hurt but alive. He figured out the ship is low on energy and that the engines are okay. He’s unconscious right now and I don’t want to move him. Can we meet at the second to last level?”

“On our way,” said W. She sounded frustrated. 

“I’ll be right there,” S said in her usual chipper voice. “You’ll never guess what I found.”

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Food Safety

Hello Friends, Family, and Fans;

I worked at the Canadian Food Inspection Agency (CFIA) back in 2008, and the thing that stood out to me the most was how under funded they were. I was an agency hire and was assigned the responsibility to copy edit and typeset the newest rules for how to slaughter farm animals. It was a hard job and I was pretty freaked out that I could miss a typo.

We’ll never find out if I totally screwed up because my contract ended in early August and then the big Listeriosis outbreak happened, which forced a complete reset on everything.

The big things I learned there were how hard people in CFIA work to make sure we’re healthy and how much they care.

The new government has started cutting jobs to save money, look good to conservative voters, and implement more AI. According to FoodSafteyFirst.ca, the cuts are roughly 20% at both the CFIA and Agriculture and Agri-Food Canada (AAFC).

That level of cuts isn’t going to be replaceable with AI or “working smarter”. It’s going to affect our food and our ability to produce food.

Our food safety system is being dismantled.

Canada’s food safety system rests on two pillars: the CFIA inspectors who check the food on your plate today, and the AAFC researchers that help farmers grow food that feeds your family tomorrow.

The federal government is cutting both. Seven AAFC research facilities—some over a century old—are set to close. Nearly 600 CFIA jobs are being cut, which is more than one-fifth of the agency’s workforce.

This isn’t a budget trim. It’s a dismantling. A unanimous report from the House of Commons Agriculture Committee agrees—and is urging the government to reverse course. The government is cutting to the bone when there is no more fat to trim. 

From the slaughterhouse line to the research field, the whole system is being hollowed out—and Canadians will pay with their health, their wallets, and their trust.

https://foodsafetyfirst.ca/

“Safe food doesn’t happen by accident.”

If you care about the safety of our food, go to the following site and email your Member of Parliament and the Prime Minister: https://foodsafetyfirst.ca/ It’s really quick and easy.

Thank you in advance!

Stay safe and be kind,

Éric

Men in Black – JenEric Movie Review

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Hello Cinephiles,

Today we’re talking about the 1997 film Men in Black.

Story

This has all the tropes of a hidden magical world urban fantasy and the same basic plot but dressed up in a science fiction and spy story.

It’s done very well despite more than a few slow downs for gags.

Score: 0.5

Characters

Agent K is an interesting character and a great contrast to the overly talkative J. Both get a decent amount of character development and when Smith gets out of his own joking way, his character shines.

Score: 1

Dialogue

There are a lot of nice quippy lines as to be expected from the cast and it’s a really quotable movie.

Score: 1

Visuals and Music

The movie holds up well almost thirty years later. The aliens are a little muppet-like but still pretty awesome. The camera work and special effects are solid.

The music is pure nostalgia and highly entertaining.

Score: 1

Fun

The entire family liked it. I was impressed with the lack of cringe and lack of offensive jokes. (There were a few fat jokes that made me sigh but nothing heinous.)

Score: 1

Overall

With solid special effects and a cast that is both kick ass and funny, this movie offers a fun story that holds up very well.

Final Score: 4.5 Stars out of 5

Imposter Syndrome

Hello my Friends, Family, and Fans;

This will probably come as a shock to you, but your favourite author probably has imposter syndrome.

Image of Big Bird, writing in a notebook, sitting at a large boardroom table with a group of men with laptops.

The root of imposter syndrome for me is that I never feel like I know what I’m doing. I have written or co-written over 15 books and I still feel like I’m just winging it. (Pun intended… don’t forget to vote for Winging It in the Auroras)

I love technology but half of what I do for fixing a computer is googling the answer and the other half is turning things on and off. I sometimes wonder how I manage to make anything work.

The Secret

I think I figured it out. That’s the secret, no matter how confident and in control people seem, they still have insecurities. Writing in particular is an exercise in pushing through those insecurities.

Everyone has doubts, everyone worries they aren’t good enough, and everyone wants to improve. If they don’t, they don’t really care. It’s easy to be confident when you don’t give a crap.

Keep trying new things and just keep moving forward. That’s the only way to prove you aren’t an imposter.

Good luck!

Stay safe and be kind,

Éric

Our Tropes for “A Study in Aether” – image

The tropes we use in A Study in Aether

Every book utilizes tropes, even if it’s to subvert them, and A Study in Aether is no exception. This book covers: Magic exists!, Young Adult, Urban Fantasy, Detailed worldbuilding, Hidden magical world, Single POV, Kidnapping mystery, and First day of school.

A Study in Aether by Éric Desmarais
Cover art by @pinkpiggy93

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The Super Mario Galaxy Movie – JenEric Movie Review

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Hello Cinephiles,

Today we’re talking about the 2026 film The Super Mario Galaxy Movie.

Story

The story was about the same level as the Super Mario Bros. video game and had significantly more plot threads that were not resolved.

Score: 0

Characters

The movie doesn’t slow down between set pieces and nostalgia to give anyone much development except Bowser, who then goes back to being a jerk. It would have been nice to have some sort of character bonding other than the one scene of Peach and Mario “not being angry”.

Both Peach and Rosalina suffer from the “Strong Female Character” syndrome where they are unbeatable unless the plot dictates they get captured.

Score: 0

Dialogue

There were some clever pieces of dialogue, a lot of call backs to the games, and some fun silliness.

Score: 1

Visuals and Music

The animation and easter eggs were wonderful. The space scenes were pretty and the character design was great.

The music was lovely and used lots of themes and sections from the games.

Score: 1

Fun

The kids loved it although even they had questions afterward about some plot points. The adults were less impressed but didn’t hate it.

I loved the nostalgia factor and I should be the prime audience for this, but it mostly left me meh. It wasn’t a good story and the characters were 8-bit.

Score: 0.5

Overall

A pretty animated film with enough nostalgia to keep you interested and some amazing music. Unfortunately, the story isn’t interesting and the characters are flat.

Final Score: 2.5 Stars out of 5