The science behind Crushing It

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Probably one of the biggest hurdles I had in writing this book was the science. Writing it clearly enough that readers could follow along, but not get bogged down by the science, was hard.

I think my favourite science part was the obstacle course ice breaker in the March Break camp. I had a lot of fun planning that out, and I even made the modified version of it that we recorded for the cover reveal video. My eldest and her friend completed it together.

The STEM competition was more difficult, mostly because I had to make it more advanced. I discussed the five different sections with Éric beforehand, finally deciding on optics, electronics, programming (part 1 & 2), construction, and mystery.

A bit of background on me: I have a Bachelor of Science, so I took many many post-secondary science classes. Do I remember them? Not in the slightest.

However, I do remember how to research for them. Mostly.

Éric (a huge science nerd) was a huge help with all of it, but especially the optics and mystery.

My mom (has her masters in computer science) and sister (has her bachelors in a information technology) were invaluable for the programming section. I was able to suggest solutions and they would explain why they would or wouldn’t work. Most of that discussion went into the book.

Overall, I had a lot of fun writing the science of the book, and I hope you have fun and learn a little while reading it. This is not a science book, but I tried to make it as accurate as possible.

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Mini MSN Chats 4-5

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Here follows the accounts of 2003-version MSN chats between Tommy and Carter, set in the middle of “Crushing It” as they navigate their long-distance relationship.

MSN chat #4.1
MSN chat #4.2
MSN chat #5
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Crushing It Style Comps

Crushing It is a queer YA cosy romance with low stakes. There are several other books that have a similar style, in one way or another, to my book. Here is the image I made with all the covers of the style comparisons.

Books and TV shows that have a similar style as Crushing It. Pictures of Heartstopper Vol 1-4 by Alice Oseman, And They Lived… by Steven Salvatore, Out of the Blue by Jason June, So This is Ever After by F. T. Lukens, Camp by L. C. Rosen, Red, White & Royal Blue by Casey McQuiston, Stuck With You by ‘Nathan Burgoine, Then Everything Happens at Once by M-E Girard, In The Key of Dale by Benjamin Lefebvre, Will Grayson, Will Grayson by John Green & David Levithan, Simon vs The Homo Sapiens Agenda by Becky Albertalli, Disney’s High School Musical The Musical The Series, Young Royals, Sex Education, Love, Simon, and Love Victor all surround the image of the book Crushing It by Jen Desmarais.

Summary

After an epic grounding for some bad decisions with even worse friends, Tommy is lucky to even go to the Door Tech March Break camp. There, he crosses paths with Carter Batudev, and chemistry isn’t just for the classroom. With love and a renewed interest in STEM, Tommy returns home to Parry Sound, where, to the relief of his parents, he makes better friends, and joins the STEM club.

When the club goes to the province-wide competition in Toronto, he’s reunited with Carter, whose team is also competing. Thus ensues a wild long weekend full of romance, hijinks, STEM, and singing.

Includes a novelette from Carter’s POV at the dinner theatre show Knights of Everdome.

The first book in the Lucky in Love series.

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Spotify Music Playlist for Crushing It

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Crushing It has some pretty great music in it, so I made a spotify playlist of all the songs, in the order they appear within the book.

Do you think you can figure out what happens during each song?

Songs in order of appearance

  • “I Want You” by Savage Garden
  • “Get To Know You” by Tommy Fairfield*
  • “Clocks” by Coldplay
  • “Survivor” by Destiny’s Child
  • “Twinkle, Twinkle, Little Star” by Jane Taylor (nursery rhyme)
  • “Old MacDonald Had A Farm” by Thomas d’Urfey (nursery rhyme)
  • “Puff, The Magic Dragon” by Peter, Paul, and Mary
  • “Cartoon Heroes (Speedy Mix)” by Barbie Young
  • “In The Navy ‘99 (XXL Disaster Remix)” by CAPTAIN JACK
  • “Sexy Planet” by Crystal Aliens
  • “Circle of Life” by Elton John and Tim Rice
  • “I Just Can’t Wait to be King” by Elton John and Tim Rice
  • “Hakuna Matata” by Elton John and Tim Rice
  • “Can You Feel The Love Tonight” by Elton John and Tim Rice
  • “Be Prepared” by Elton John and Tim Rice

*Artist is fictional

Read about my thoughts on music in this book here!

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“Crushing It” Review 2

Crushing It was sent out for reviews in May, and I’ve received some in return. Here’s one from best-selling author Jamieson Wolf:

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Mini MSN Chats 1-3

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Here follows the accounts of 2003-version MSN chats between Tommy and Carter, set in the middle of “Crushing It” as they navigate their long-distance relationship.

MSN chat #1
MSN chat #2
MSN chat #3
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Nimona – JenEric Movie Review

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Hello Cinephiles,

Today we’re talking about the 2023 film Nimona.

Story

The movie took a lot of traditional fantasy story elements and moved them around or flipped them upside down. It meant that everything felt familiar but was still suprising.

The not-so-subtle message of inclusiveness and not treating others like monsters is painfully current and needed.

Score: 1

Characters

I was so happy to see the queer relationships in this. It was a relief not to just have it hinted at. The characters were all very well fleshed out and distinct. Despite being in a massive city, the cast is actually quite small which gives us that personal time with the characters while keeping the feel of a rich world.

I liked Nimona’s chaos gremlin energy and was a huge fan of Ballister’s unyielding goodness.

Score: 1

Dialogue

There were a lot of quippy lines, lots of good jokes, but also lots of well used emotional words. The characters don’t outright answer every question, but they also don’t completely dodge every question and that leads to some excellent character moments and developement.

Score: 1

Visuals and Music

I found some of the animation almost underdone and other parts absolutely gorgeous. It was probably the style of animation that threw me. Beyond the animation was the astounding use of colour, lighting, camera angles, and world design.

Score: 1

Fun

As a creator, you want to make your audience feel something and this movie delivers an emotional rollercoaster that felt personal while still being fun.

The entire family was glued to the screen.

Score: 1

Overall

This was a fantastic movie with great diversity and impressive writting. If you enjoy animation, science fiction, fantasy, or good stories; please watch it.

Final Score: 5 Stars out of 5*


*A 5 star review doesn’t mean the movie was perfect nor that it is perfect for everyone but it is a movie I believe is as close to perfect as possible.

The Music of Crushing It

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I didn’t know this book was a book right away. But more on that later. Right now, I want to talk about the music in the book.

Because wow, was that a surprise!

After I had finished writing the March Break half of the book in April 2021, I edited in early June. I was looking up how to write lyrics from a song in fiction so that I could write the lyrics I had chosen properly in the text.

That’s when I discovered that if you use an artist’s lyrics, you have to pay licencing fees. Yikes! (Although, yeah, that makes COMPLETE sense!)

Cue panic. We had lyrics in Assassins! Accidental Matchmakers and we had already submitted it to our publisher. (Don’t worry, we took them all out before it went to print.) Music wasn’t a big deal in that book.

But music was a huge deal in this book. Tommy sings a song to Carter to tell him that he likes him. I had agonized over which song to pick, and I wasn’t happy with it. Taking out the lyrics made it feel even more impersonal.

Éric suggested I write my own song.

I laughed at him.

Less than a week later, a snippet of a song popped into my head as I was falling asleep. I was no longer falling asleep. I tapped out syllables as I worked through the verse and then the chorus appeared fully formed in my head. By the time less than 15 minutes had passed, the full song had been figured out. I hoped it would stick around until morning.

Surprisingly, it did, and I wrote it down with very little changes.

I did not get any constructive criticism on it because it’s supposed to sound rough, as Tommy wrote it in about half an hour. I figured a 36yo writing a song as she fell asleep was about equivalent to a 14yo writing their first song.

So I put my song in the book and put it away.

Then Éric suggested I write the music for it.

I laughed at him.

Are you seeing a trend here?

His suggestion stuck in my brain. I had the tune I wanted in mind… Why couldn’t I write it down, other than the fact that I didn’t know how to play guitar?

So I asked to borrow my dad’s guitar and sat down with a learning app. It was actually kinda fun, but I was struggling with the size of the guitar. Two weeks later, I bought my own guitar.

But I still couldn’t figure out how to write the chords for my song.

I asked author Bruce Gordon for help. In case you didn’t know, he plays guitar and is very good at it. And apparently, he enjoys writing chords for lyrics.

I sent him a recording of myself singing the tune I’d come up with, and asked for extremely basic chord progressions.

Not only did he figure them out for me, but he had several video calls to teach me how to play it properly.

I owe him a lot.

Thus, the song was born!

You can hear my song “Get to Know You” in the Spotify playlist for Crushing It.

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“Crushing It” Review 1

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Crushing It was sent out for reviews in May, and I’ve received some in return. Here’s one:

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Introducing Secondary Characters Part 2/2

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These are a few of the secondary characters in Crushing It.

This is the Oldtown High School team

Elyse Garrido

Appearance inspired by Meesha Garbett

Age: 14

Appearance: Wavy brown hair, blue eyes, short, tan skin

Grade: 9

Favourite class: Math

Siblings: Older sister Rachel (seen here)

Lauryn

Appearance inspired by Jadah Marie

Age: 15

Appearance: Black hair, brown eyes, medium height, Black

Grade: 10

Favourite class: Science

Alicia

Appearance inspired by Navia Robinson

Age: 16

Appearance: Long wavy black hair, brown eyes, medium height, brown skin

Grade: 11

Favourite class: Music

George

Appearance inspired by Caleel Harris

Age: 17

Appearance: Black hair (in corn rows in this book), brown eyes, tall, muscled, Black

Grade: 12

Favourite class: Computer Science

Adrien

Appearance inspired by Jack Dylan Grazer

Age: 18

Appearance: Light brown hair, blue eyes, tall, white, Jewish

Grade: 13

Favourite class: Chemistry

Siblings: Older sister Gabrielle (Jason’s sister-in-law)

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